Lang-8 1 Rewrite

私は国際関係がとても面白いと思います。いつもエコノミストと他の新聞を読んだり、ラジオのニュースを聞いたりします。だから、今学期、私はよく最近のニュースについてブログを書くつもりです。たくさんニュースについてポストを書くから、国際関係の言葉を覚えます。私は国際関係の研究をしたいから、これはとても大事です。でも、つまらないポストを書きませんよ！笑わされるニュースだけについて書きます。

I think that this blog post was ok. I definitely used some new kanji and terms related to the news, which is my goal for the semester. I also seem to have made few corrections, so my writing style was fine. On the other hand, I probably could have used a greater variety of grammar. The grammar that we were doing at the time in Nakama 2 Ch. 11 was not really applicable when talking about my own thoughts on a post, but Chapter 10 grammar could have been good. Also, upon looking at the posts that other people in the class wrote, I probably could have written more. Since it was just a post introducing my topic for the semester, I did not think that I needed to write that much. But, I will write more in the future. 

G8かいぎの時、このリーダーがサッカサッカーのゲームを見ました。
どの国のチームがゴールをするか知っていますか。